Feel free to comment here (as anywhere else on this page). But I would be particularly interested in hearing your answers to the following question: after reading "Jesse", would you want to buy the book if it were published?
Don't worry, this will not affect the availability of the story online - it will stay here as long as I have anything to say about it. However, I would like to have the time to continue writing, (so many ideas in my head just waiting to be put to paper!) and if I were able to convince a publisher that my book would sell, it would make everything just so much easier! Thank you for your support.
